Throughout the grand pattern of things you secure a B- for effort and hard work. Where exactly you lost us was first in your specifics. As people say, details make or break the argument.. And that couldn't be much more correct here. Having said that, allow me tell you exactly what did deliver the results. Your writing can be highly persuasive which is possibly why I am taking the effort to opine. I do not really make it a regular habit of doing that. Next, even though I can notice a leaps in reason you come up with, I am not really certain of exactly how you seem to unite the ideas which inturn make your final result. For the moment I will, no doubt yield to your position but trust in the future you link your dots better.